Not even death!

When the sun goes down,
& my fear rises,
your bold voice still echoes…
rediscovering the strength in me!
When the insecurities starts dissolving my dreams,
the fragrance of your hug…
secures everything!
When the world looks down at me,
& I can’t rise,
your powerful words…
creates a new world for me!
Nothing can depart us,
not even death,
Maa, I’m still attached to the umbilical cord…
this life & beyond!

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56 comments

  1. Nikhil · · Reply

    Sweet and powerful

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    1. Thank you Nikhil.

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  2. Sorry for my previous comment. It was poorly expressed. Thanks for being a blog friend.

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  3. Lovely! ❀

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    1. Ty πŸ’Ÿ

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  4. hey..excellent! the ‘fragrance of a Maa’s hug’ – beautiful…

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    1. Thanks lot πŸ™‚

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  5. True, right from day one ..xx

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    1. πŸ™‚ thank you for stopping by! Hugs:)

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  6. shwe..no one can ever break that umbilical cord.. hugs..

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    1. True that πŸ™‚ lots of love :*

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  7. Magnificent Shweta.

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    1. Thank you so much πŸ™‚

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      1. Pleasure 😊

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  8. Sweet powerful words ❀

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    1. Thanks love πŸ™‚

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      1. ❀

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  9. So Nice Shweta ji.

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    1. Thanks πŸ™‚

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  10. “Things end, but memories last forever.” How true….some of us are criticized for remembering things….especially things that end…and why.

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    1. Such is life! There are sometimes no answers for such why’s!!! 😦

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      1. True….criticized or not….I am still grateful for my total recall….and those who criticized me the longest and the loudest….eventually said “I wish I had your memories.” ‘Nuff said.

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      2. πŸ˜€ that’s the right spirit to live life to the fullest!

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  11. Beautifully expressed poem, with a very powerful ending. The quote complements it perfectly.

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    1. Thanks a bunch Millie πŸ™‚

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  12. Love it ❀
    Beautiful, profound & heart-warming at the same time.
    P.S.- Love the look of your blog Shweta ❀

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    1. Thanks Era 😘

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  13. Good way to express ur feelings.yeah.memories r fotever.where is ur maa,dear themissshweta.

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    1. Thank you πŸ™‚

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      1. Welcome.

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  14. Lovely tribute to mother! Great one.

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    1. Thanks lot πŸ™‚

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  15. Such a sweet poem, well written Miss Shweta ! Cheers πŸ™‚

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    1. Thank you so much πŸ™‚

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  16. Very well expressed ..

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    1. Thank you dear πŸ™‚

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  17. So well written! Loved it πŸ™‚

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    1. Thank you dearie 😘

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  18. This is beautifully written! So powerful. πŸ˜„

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    1. Thanks lot πŸ™‚

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  19. loved it…..mom is the best..such an lovely poem…

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    1. Thank you so much πŸ™‚

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  20. Lovely and beautiful. Well expressed. πŸ™‚

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    1. Thank you πŸ™‚

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  21. Beautifully written… so powerful!!

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    1. Tysm Shamira:* xx

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  22. Very beautifully penned ShwetaπŸ‘Œ

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    1. Thank you Radhika πŸ™‚ I’m glad you liked it ….

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      1. Most welcome😊

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  23. very nice.your mother must be very gifted to have a daughter like you.

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    1. Thank you so much 😊 ❀️

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