A Life without you…

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Every breathe I take…
every time I blink,
everyday that I live,
I remember you.
With an incomplete existence…
with dreams so faded,
with a direction less path,
I remember you.
Never imagined one…
still living,
still going ahead,
still searching,
a life without you.

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  1. Frank H Johnson · · Reply

    Contemplative, Reflective, Resigned – but not without Hope – Supported by Faith.

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    1. Thank you for always being so optimistic Frank πŸ™‚

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      1. Frank H Johnson · ·

        It seems to me that all of us have to find a balance between what is actually happening in our life, and the motivation to reach past it for that which we desire to happen. Equally important is learning to “accept”, with the help of the Lord, that not everything we “want/desire” is what we “need”. (Thank God, we don’t get all we want.)
        Jesus gives us an example of this “way of living.” In Gethsemane He prayed, “Father, remove this cup (this horrendous way of dying) from me. But please, not what I want. What do you want?” (Luke 22:42, The Message)
        It was with this kind of resignation to the will of God that allowed Christ to balance (or refocus) is eyes on the future God had prepared for Him.
        In simple terms, following Christ is to stop following oneself.

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      2. These golden words gonna be with me forever πŸ™‚ Thanks a lot!

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  2. It’s always easy in life to part ways from people forever, what makes it difficult is to ‘MOVE’ forward. . .!!! πŸ™‚

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    1. Very true Parin. But we eventually do so… πŸ™‚

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      1. Yup… Time heals everything in the end and we eventually adjust with it..!!

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      2. Absolutely! πŸ™‚

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  3. Believing is Seeing. Blessings! πŸ“

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    1. Very true. Thank you πŸ™‚

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  4. I agree with Parin, time heals everything in the end… But what we can do to reach that end sooner? Because life is miserable until that end. 😦

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    1. It’s really a difficult path. All we can do is look at the brighter side of life till then & Beyond.

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  6. A beautiful piece…I love the tone…great work Shweta.

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    1. Thanks lot Lina πŸ™‚

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  7. This a beautiful depiction of being hung up on someone but still taking that one step forward, still going ahead. Great poem πŸ˜„

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    1. Thank you Ameena ☺

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  8. shweta..there plays a game between our heart and brain. and eventually our belief depends on who wins the match..

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    1. Well said Akhila! Thank God that we own that control πŸ™‚

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      1. yes.. that control is the will power which makes us realistic.

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      2. Absolutely! πŸ™‚

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  9. Beautiful poem πŸ™‚

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    1. Thank you Freda πŸ™‚
      Also, your dp is literally making me to eat some barfis 😍 πŸ˜‹ 😁

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      1. hehe:D thanks hun ❀

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  10. Beautiful. This might earth life oriented, but it (the experience) serves to but parallel our primordial experience with God, the loss of His fellowship, His security forfeited in the first created being from whom we descend. Just a thought, not wanting to diminish what you have shared here, please excuse my (perhaps) gibberish. Thanks for such nice work.

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    1. I appreciate your comment. Thanks for stopping by πŸ™‚

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  11. Great blog you have out here. πŸ™‚
    Enjoyed reading your posts.
    See you around.

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    1. Thank you Pranjal for connecting πŸ™‚ Gonna check yours now! πŸ™‚

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      1. You’re true to your words Shweta πŸ˜€

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  12. Beautiful and hopeful…

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    1. Thank you Akhila. Hope you’re having a great Sunday πŸ™‚

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  13. Beautiful my dear! Btw where have you been? Haven’t seen you post in some time now. Hope all is well!

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  14. So emotional…… Could relate to my life. Stay blessed..

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    1. Thank you dear πŸ™‚

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  15. Just beautiful! πŸ™‚ They carry the charm. Nice lines..

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    1. Thank You Prakash πŸ™‚

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  16. simply beautiful !! Loved it πŸ™‚

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    1. Tysm Akshita πŸ™‚ Hope you’re doing great πŸ™‚

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      1. You are welcome ! Nice to meet you πŸ™‚

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      2. Likewise πŸ™‚

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  17. Wonderfully written!!

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    1. Thanks Mrudula πŸ™‚ Glad to be connected πŸ™‚

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      1. Same here… Hope to see you around often.. πŸ™‚

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      2. Likewise πŸ™‚

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  18. Crisp and beautiful. You seem to have a very good flow of thoughts. Every line seems to have a story within. Existential reality of life, well written. πŸ™‚

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    1. I’m glad you liked it πŸ™‚ Stay connected!

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      1. Pleasure it is. πŸ™‚

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  19. Hey. Nice piece you got.
    I have nominated you for the Liebster Award.
    https://fodindo.wordpress.com/2016/05/14/the-liebster-award/

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    1. Thank you.. Lemme check the link πŸ™‚

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  20. Beautifully written. I agree with a previous commenter who said each line seems to have a story inside of it. Absolutely lovely.

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    1. Thanks lot πŸ™‚

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  21. Hello and thank you for checking out and following Flaggfan.:) I appreciate you!

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    1. Welcome πŸ™‚

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  22. Life without special people is not quite the life we want or need.

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    1. Absolutely 😦

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  23. beautiful…really lied it! memories and ,,,hope

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    1. Thank you πŸ™‚

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  24. Isabella Simons · · Reply

    Really touched me..

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    1. Thank you Isabella πŸ™‚

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  25. Sometm…its hurt to deal with memories…of some1 who was one so close but we know that reality is even more harder…..

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    1. Yes Ajaz you’re right!

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  26. This is so well crafted. So beautiful. Delicate writing. I love it!

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    1. Thanks for such a lovely comment! ❀

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